Slow, gentle days this summer. Precious moments are spent outside on the porch, listening to the harmonies of birds with a book on my lap during sunset hour. Each evening, I squint at the pages and attempt to read as much as I can before the inevitable darkness takes hold. I’m always amazed at how quickly the light leaves when I try to grasp onto it. Haven’t I learned yet the transient nature of it all?
Your words beautifully transport me to the serene moments you've been experiencing this summer. The vivid description of sitting on the porch, listening to the birds' harmonies as the sun sets, is a captivating image that evokes a sense of tranquility and connection with nature. Your reflection on the fleeting nature of light and the lessons it holds about life's transient moments is both poignant and relatable. It's a reminder that embracing impermanence can enrich our appreciation for each passing moment.
GOD I love your writing. Absolute incredible economy of words, like when you see a "simple" line drawing by an incredibly talented artist, and immediately you recognize what they're drawing and all I can do is simply wonder how artists accomplish that. Sometimes I feel like it takes me so many words to say everything I want to say, but none the less I love to read your writing.
I also love to find the particular book I'm looking for in used book stores or thrift shops. Although I haven't dedicated as much time to this endeavor as I'd like, especially lately. Thank you for reminding me how magical this moment is.
Regarding leisure time...I love your description and how you handle it. I love to write, and make daily progress on writing either on Substack or various forums, but after a few months my prose becomes as lifeless as a stale cracker. I only recently just snapped out of this white flour writing by being able to reconnect with a new passion, and it snapped my awareness to what I've been thinking.
I've noticed one thing that this world, or rather our current society, or perhaps just a very vocal minority within that society, is leisure time. This segment of our society loves to bark at those of us who are fortunate enough to have a bit of time to nurture our creativity, and if barking doesn't work then guilt might, so thats what they will go to. I recently quit a part time job, so I understand what you're saying throughout alot of this post, and only recently have I been able to embrace it and enjoy it like a small piece of fine chocolate.
There's something about your writing that is...absolutely delicious and I can not get enough. Looking forward to reading more.
I can't thank you enough for your kind words and support, Joaquin! The way you express yourself in even just a comment is so telling of the incredible beauty of your own writing as well. Like you, I am working on building a habit of writing so your support & comments have really pushed me to keep on going! You're so right about how our society doesn't value leisure time, and I'm glad you are able to embrace your free time more - love how you compare it to a fine piece of chocolate :) I look forward to reading more of your work as well!
Your words beautifully transport me to the serene moments you've been experiencing this summer. The vivid description of sitting on the porch, listening to the birds' harmonies as the sun sets, is a captivating image that evokes a sense of tranquility and connection with nature. Your reflection on the fleeting nature of light and the lessons it holds about life's transient moments is both poignant and relatable. It's a reminder that embracing impermanence can enrich our appreciation for each passing moment.
Wow, thanks so much Winston! I'm happy to know that the piece resonated with you. Thank you for reading! :)
GOD I love your writing. Absolute incredible economy of words, like when you see a "simple" line drawing by an incredibly talented artist, and immediately you recognize what they're drawing and all I can do is simply wonder how artists accomplish that. Sometimes I feel like it takes me so many words to say everything I want to say, but none the less I love to read your writing.
I also love to find the particular book I'm looking for in used book stores or thrift shops. Although I haven't dedicated as much time to this endeavor as I'd like, especially lately. Thank you for reminding me how magical this moment is.
Regarding leisure time...I love your description and how you handle it. I love to write, and make daily progress on writing either on Substack or various forums, but after a few months my prose becomes as lifeless as a stale cracker. I only recently just snapped out of this white flour writing by being able to reconnect with a new passion, and it snapped my awareness to what I've been thinking.
I've noticed one thing that this world, or rather our current society, or perhaps just a very vocal minority within that society, is leisure time. This segment of our society loves to bark at those of us who are fortunate enough to have a bit of time to nurture our creativity, and if barking doesn't work then guilt might, so thats what they will go to. I recently quit a part time job, so I understand what you're saying throughout alot of this post, and only recently have I been able to embrace it and enjoy it like a small piece of fine chocolate.
There's something about your writing that is...absolutely delicious and I can not get enough. Looking forward to reading more.
I can't thank you enough for your kind words and support, Joaquin! The way you express yourself in even just a comment is so telling of the incredible beauty of your own writing as well. Like you, I am working on building a habit of writing so your support & comments have really pushed me to keep on going! You're so right about how our society doesn't value leisure time, and I'm glad you are able to embrace your free time more - love how you compare it to a fine piece of chocolate :) I look forward to reading more of your work as well!
Obsessed with your words 🖤
Thank you!! That means so much because I’m a huge fan of your writing ♥️
Thank you Ayanna 🥰